Umbrellas lay forgotten,
Shoes were tossed carelessly,
They let go of all their inhibitions,
chased each other and danced in the pouring rain.
Childhood had checked itself in at the old age home.
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Aww, heartwarming, beautiful and yet kind of sad.
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Glad to hear that you liked it. It does induce a bit of sadness. Thank you, Miriam! š
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Touching! But it must have been a beautiful dance to witness and be a part of their gay abandon.
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Oh yes, that would have been quite a sight. And I guess, for now, we will have to be content with whatever image our mind conjures up at that thought. Thanks a lot for reading, dear. ā¤š
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This is what naked soul of humans look like in childhood
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Thanks, Kalyan! š
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so beautiful- letting go of inhibitions is the way to live!
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Oh, yes! It sure is one of the best ways to live. Thank you very much. š
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Oh so beautiful poetic lines penned, Shweta and for sure childhood walks in at the old age and it is so lovely.
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Thank you so much, dear. I’m so happy to hear that. ā„ļøš
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Welcome Shweta
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Awww! Beautiful, Shweta. In my mind’s eye I can almost picture the image.
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Glad to know you loved it! Thanks a lot, my dear! šš¤š
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It was my pleasure, my dear.
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Something different that I read today š
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Aww and wow .I can actually see it happening in front my eyes while reading.
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This was a surprise ending.Short and very sweet.
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