The walls of their little one-bedroom cottage were covered with tiny drawings. Each of those drawings was a multi-colored, intricate pattern, painstakingly drawn by Jamie. She loved to paint. One of her most favorite things to do was strike funny poses against the backdrop of her painting masterpieces. Dave was recollecting fond memories of his wife as he stepped into what once used to be their little piece of heaven. A lot had changed since then. He couldn’t help feel sorry about the neglected state of matters. Jamie’s heart would break at the current sad state of their home! The walls and the beautiful paintings were but a sad sorrow of the bright past… much like their creator. Fate had left her comatose as a result of a freak accident, and the walls suffered from gross neglect. Armed with a camera, Dave was lost in thought. Happy, old memories rooted him to the spot and held him hostage. Returning back to reality with a jolt, he realized that he had to find a way to make the place look appealing. Life had thrown him a rather difficult and painful curveball. He was running out of options. Their house would soon become the latest victim to be claimed by Jamie’s hefty medical bills.
This story was written in response to Sadje’s What Do You See prompt #36. Thank you Sadje for hosting this challenge. The challenge is to use the picture prompt as inspiration to compose an original story, poem, or a caption.
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Memories are confusing.. once a bliss, now haunting.
This is heart-wrenching.
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Yes. Memories do have that power. Thanks a lot, Anisha ♥️
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My pleasure, Shweta!
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❤️🤗
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I absolutely agree to you!
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Thank you, Rashmi ♥️
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Touching story ! Loved your take on the prompt ! 👍
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Thank you so much ❤️🤗
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Memories can heal and can devastate at the same time
Very well written 😊
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Indeed. They are quite powerful. Thank you so much, Era ♥️🤗
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You’re most welcome 💙
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A heartbreaking story Shweta. Your words have conveyed the poignancy of his feelings.
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Thank you so much for the prompt, Sadje. I couldn’t have done this without it 😀
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It’s a pleasure 🙏
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The thought that all those paintings which she painstakingly drew once would be painted over makes my heart clench tight; only to make it appealing for some stranger. It’s weird how the same thing can mean so different for different people.
Good take on the prompt dear.
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Wow. That’s very well put. As they say, one man’s treasure is another one’s garbage. Or so I’ve heard! Thank you so much, Era ♥️🤗
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It’s Aswathy 😅
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Uh oh. This is what I do when I stay up well past my bedtime. I am so sorry, dear. Please forgive me.😳
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😀 that’s completely fine
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🙂
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Touching! Well written
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Thank you so much, Akshita ♥️
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My pleasure 💐
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Wow this was a really emotional one.
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Thanks a lot, Pooja ♥️
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You’re very welcome!
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I hope you had a great day ♥️🤗
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You too!
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This was lovely Shweta❤💕
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I’m so happy to hear that. Thank you so much ❤️
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❤❤
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I hope you have a great day ♥️🤗
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Lovely take!
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Thank you so much, Harsh 😊
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I so liked your take on it. It was very different.
It was sad the way you ended.
Ah, Memories!
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I’m so glad that it was a refreshing story. I wanted to write something that was not a cliche. I’m glad that you think it worked 😊
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Touching! Great take!!
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Thanks a lot, Aashi ♥️
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Heart crippling !!
How his state would be when he will bid his final goodbye to the much loved home 😦
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Yes. It’s heartbreaking. Thank you so much for reading, dear ♥️🤗
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You are welcome 😀
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very touching and emotional story Shweta!! well done!
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Thank you so much, dear ♥️🤗
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So much emotion and pain in this, but a good lesson to never give up
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Indeed. The fight must continue. Life must go on. Thank you so much 🙂
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Ah! Your depiction is beautiful, Shweta, moved me, every bit. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Aishwarya ♥️🤗
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Most welcome, Shweta. 🙂
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