The little brick house was the first and the only one that her father had built. Amala and her parents had turned the small house into a beautiful home. They had been extremely happy…until a freak accident snatched her father away from them. His death hit them hard – emotionally and financially. Amala and her mother struggled to make ends meet. It was a long struggle but they didn’t give up. Amala’s mother worked odd jobs to cover their daily expenses. She worked multiple shifts to pay for Amala’s education. Amala took up a part-time job at a pizza joint to help her mother. There were days when they went without a meal. Their beloved home was greatly in need of repair – the roof leaked, weeds engulfed their once pretty garden. But money turned out to be a bigger problem than they expected. When they failed to make the mortgage payments on time, the bank repossessed their beloved home. Amala still remembered the day they lost their only home. Little Amala remained oblivious to the heated discussions around her. The bidding war for their house’s ownership continued. Her lips trembled and her eyes welled up with emotion. Her little hands were wrapped tightly around her mother’s.
Amala stopped reminiscing and suddenly became aware of her surroundings. 20 years later, she and her mother were in front of their first home with tears in their eyes. Amala was no longer a sad little girl. Her hard work and her mother’s prayers had paid off. Amala was now a newly recruited IAS officer. And they were the proud and happy owners of their first home.. once again. Amala heard heated discussions in the background and that evoked a deep sense of déjà vu. This time around, the heated discussions were between the interior designers that Amala had hired.
Author’s Note:
That was an emotional story. I swear that I had tears in my eyes by the time I was done with the finishing touches. I hope this story touched your hearts as well. 🙂
For non-Indian readers, Indian Administrative Service (IAS) has been termed as one of the prestigious services among the 24 government services. The Indian Administrative Service is the administrative arm of the All India Services. Considered the premier civil service of India, the IAS is one of the three arms of the All India Services along with the Indian Police Service and the Indian Forest Service. It is one of the toughest competitive exams in India.
This poem was written in response to Sue Vincent’s Thursday photo prompt – the #writephoto prompt. The challenge is to use the given photo prompt as an inspiration to create a post on your own blog… poetry, prose, humour… light or dark, whatever you choose, as long as it is fairly family-friendly. Thank you, Sue for hosting this challenge. Click on the link to know more about this challenge and to read the entries by my fellow bloggers.
For visually challenged writers, the image shows deeply worn stone steps, scattered with plants growing in the cracks, leading up to a blue-painted door.
Image courtesy: Sue Vincent
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A heart touching story with a happy ending indeed. Great work. 👍
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Thank you so much, Megha 🙂
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This made me tear up! What a moving story Shweta. You have the gift.
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It had the same effect on me. Glad to know that you liked it. Thank you so much, Sadje. That’s so sweet of you 😊
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Not at all, it’s a pleasure
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🙂
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Touching story, Shweta!
This is a timely post. The results were published just yesterday!
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Thank you, Anisha. This is one of my personal favorites. That was a coincidence. This post was scheduled a while ago. And yesterday, I got to know that the results were published. And there were many who made their family proud and secured their future just like Amala.
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My pleasure reading, Shweta! ❣
Great coincidence! Very true. It’s a bliss when people get to achieve their dreams after long struggles.
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Oh yes. I feel so happy when I read about such real-life stories too! 🙂
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A lovely story, Shweta, beautifully told.
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Thank you so much for the prompt, Sue. 🙂
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So beautiful 💚 loved it!!
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Thank you so much, CQC. 🙂
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Love this one💖
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Thank you so much, Rishika. 🙂
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The redemption in this is wonderful.
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Happy to hear that! Thank you so much 🙂
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Timely Story…No gain without pain…Good one
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Beautiful, inspirational, touching dear
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Thank you so much, dear. 🙂
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Beautiful and touching! Loved your take Shweta ❤️
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Thank you so much, HS. How are you feeling now? 🙂
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Omg that was such an emotional read- wow!
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Thank you so much, Pooja. 🙂
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You’re welcome!
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🙂
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Such a heartfelt story, beautifully penned by you
Loved it 💕💙
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Thank you so much, Era. 🙂
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Anytime 😃
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I’m happy for Amala. Nicely narrated, Shweta. 🙂
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Me too. Thank you so much 🙂
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You are welcome, Shweta. 🙂
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❤️🤗
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So touching, so amazing!! Even I was moved to tears…wonderful Shweta♥️
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I’m so happy to hear that. Thank you so much, Ishita. 🙂
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Super
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Heartfelt story, Shweta. Love the way you are writing. Too good.
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Thank you so much, Kamalji ♥️
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You are always welcome dear Shweta 😊😊
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🙂
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😊😊😊♥️♥️♥️
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Lovely story! Keep up!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Well crafted dear..
I loved the mix of Dejavu .. how it was differently addressed yet connected 🙂
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I’m so glad that you loved it. Thank you so much, my dear ❤️
I’m glad that you noticed that part. 🤗
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You are welcome 🙂
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❤️🤗
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well done Shweta
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Thank you so much. 😃
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Very Nice… Great story about Deja VU … Its Really interesting Shweta… 🙂 ❤
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I’m glad that you liked this one. Thank you so much for reading and your lovely comment 💞
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Most Welcome Shweta, You wrote really good. I like it… 🙂 ❤ ❤
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Your words have made my day 💕
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Thanks… ❤
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