Melanie was on yet another driving lesson with her father. It was going somewhat fine until…
“Mel, you’re going too fast!”
“Oh, relax, dad. It’s only 3rd gear”
“That IS fast for you. Lower to 2nd”
“MELANIE! HOW MANY TIMES HAVE I TOLD YOU TO PRESS THE CLUTCH BEFORE SHIFTING GEARS”
“BUT DAAAAD, I PANICKED!”
“MELANIE, STOP LOOKING AT THE GEAR SHAFT! EYES ON THE ROAD”
“But dad, I..”
“OH NOOOO, THE WALL. HIT THE BRAKES, MELANIE!”
“OH NOOOOOOOOOO!?”
“BRAKES, MELANIE!”
“DAAAAAAAD, STOP FREAKING ME OUT. I FORGOT WHICH ONE’S THE BRAKE!”
“MELANIEEEEEE!”
And their car smashed through the wall.
(100 words)
This post was written in response to the Friday Fictioneers photo prompt hosted by the lovely Rochelle. The Friday Fictioneers challenge is to write a complete story – beginning, middle and end in 100 words or less, based on the given photo prompt. A huge thanks to Rochelle for hosting this challenge.
I wasn’t this disastrous while learning to drive. (My family might disagree but I don’t quite agree! 😉 ) Unlike Mel here, I did know my ABCs (Accelerator, Brake and Clutch). However, driving a car has been the one thing I have mastered in the past year. So it’s safe to say that no matter how disastrous I might have been, I am a very much better driver now. And now, I find driving rather than enjoyable. Not like the past times when I viewed driving (especially a manual transmission) at par with roller coaster rides. But I think I’ll save those hilarious experiences for another post or may be even a series of posts.
For the visually challenged readers, the picture shows a car that has smashed through a wall.
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Sounds about right for some drivers and their nervous parents, Shweta. Glad they are ok. Cars can be replaced but people can’t.
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Yes, that’s so true. Lives matter so much more. Thank you for reading 😊
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You’re most welcome 🙂
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❤️🤗
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Oh, big mistake to get your Dad to try to teach you to drive, just ask my daughter.
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Yep. I know. I had lessons with my dad too. I can attest to that fact. 😂
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Oh no! New driver, yep I can see how that could happen.
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Yep. It’s definitely possible. Thanks for reading 🙂
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I could almost hear the sound of the collision…hoping Melanie and her dad got off without too many scratches 😄
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I think they escaped without much damage. I’m happy to hear that my story was so engaging. Thank you so much 😊
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