Mirror, mirror, on the wall,
Who in this land is the wisest of all?
And always it answered:
You, my queen, are.
This disappointed the Queen for she knew that the mirror always told the truth, no matter how unpleasant it was. Anxious to know about how Pitch Black was progressing, she specifically enquired about Pitch Black:
Mirror, mirror, on the wall,
How is Pitch Black faring at the dwarfs’ home? Is she ready?
She is still learning, my Queen. But fret not, the day approaches when she will be as wise as you. Under the dwarfs’ care, she will blossom into the future Queen that this kingdom needs.
Slowly, the dwarfs imparted little yet meaningful lessons to Pitch Black and helped her become the princess she was always meant to be – the one that Queen Rowena wanted her to be. As days gave way to weeks, and weeks gave way to months, Pitch Black’s transformation was almost unbelievable. Gone was the proud, pampered and foolish girl who always fell victim to praise. Under the dwarfs’ careful mentoring, Pitch Black evolved into a humble, wise maiden who learned not to take anything for granted.
One fine day when the Queen posed her usual question to her magical mirror, it answered:
You, my queen, are; it is true.
but there is another who will one day,
not long from now,
be as wise as you.
Beloved Pitch Black, beyond the mountains
With the seven dwarfs,
Is emerging as a worthy competitor.
Pitch Black has finished her training, my Queen. She is ready. At last, she has evolved into a worthy Heir to the Throne.
(To be continued… tomorrow)
This is Part 5 of 7. Stay tuned to explore Pitch Black’s story. The next part will be published tomorrow.
This story is a part of my Twisted Fairy Tale series.
This post is a part of Blogchatter Half Marathon.

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Very interesting to read this story 👌😊🌷Have a happy weekend 🙏🌹
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I’m so happy to hear that. Thank you so much. I hope you have a great weekend too ❤️🤗
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You are most welcome 🙏🌹
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❤️🤗
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This is getting sooo good! ♥♥
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Thanks a lot, Sonali. I hope that it has been worth the wait ❤️🤗
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It is! Definitely! ♥♥
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Yay! 😍🤗😃
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What an epic story, and what an epic storyteller you truly are!!! So well written, as always my friend!!! I’m absolutely loving this!!!! 🤗🖤
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Aww, Ace. That’s so kind of you. I’m so happy to hear that. Your words have made my day 😍❤️🤗
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I am loving this!♥️
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Thanks a lot, Aksh ❤️🤗
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I like this story as there is no unsuspecting evil lurking in the sidelines.
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Oh yes, I’ve completely transformed the stepmother into a kind mother. Thank you so much, Sadje ❤️🤗
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You’re welcome. I’m enjoying this lovely tale.
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I’m so happy to hear that 😍🥰❤️🤗
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🥰❤️
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Ooh I’m loving this story so much!!!
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Thanks a lot, Poorwa. I’m so so happy to hear that. You’ve made my day! 😍🤩🥰❤️🤗
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You’re definitely a creative woman!
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Haha. Thanks, John 😃
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You’re welcome miss Suresh!
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Hope you have a great weekend 🙂
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So far so good!
Hope you do too! And hope something inspires you to keep writing awesomeness!
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That’s so kind of you. Thank you. I hope that you’ll be able to find a lot of inspiration too! 😃
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I read inspirational blogs. 🙂
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That’s great! 😃
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Wink wink.. hint hint…. 😂
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Haha. I don’t know if I’m thinking along the same lines. But nevertheless, thank you for your support 😊
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I was giving you a compliment on your blog 😁
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I’m so honoured. Thanks a lot, John 😃
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You’re welcome!
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Have a great weekend 🙂
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You too, Shweta!
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Ooh I wonder what’s going to happen now that her training is over. I like how this story is a tale of self-growth and learning.
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Thanks a lot, Simone. I’m so happy to hear that you liked my version of the fairy tale 🙂
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Wowww..! You are such a sweet and lovely storyteller..! Very interested dear Shweta..!☺️🤗
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Awww, Filarance!!! 😍😍😍😍🤗🤗🤗❤️
You just make my day with your kind words. Thank you so much. I’m so happy to hear that 🥰😻❤️🤗
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Woww..! I’m so glad that I have your day my dear..! And you’re very welcome..! It’s my pleasure..! Have a beautiful weekend..!🤗🤗🤗💖
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The evolution is really touching ❤❤🥺 This is turning into a really sweet story. Can’t wait for the last 2 parts !!😄
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Aww. I’m so happy to hear that! 😍
Thanks a lot, Nandika. ❤️🤗
The second last part will be up by tomorrow 😊
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Love it! I keep looking forward to the next part, Shweta. Excellent!❤️
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Thanks a lot, Grace! I’m so happy to hear that 😍❤️🤗
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My pleasure.💕
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❤️🤗
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Hmmm nice and quick has Pitch Black is growing into a beautiful girl and the queen mother will not like it what the mirror is telling her. Great story, keep it going.
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Haha. You might be in for a surprise 😜
Do keep reading, my dear. Thanks a lot 😁❤️🤗
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That would be very interesting Shweta. Always welcome dear.
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🤗🤗🤗❤️❤️❤️
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At last, Pitch Black is turning around. Nothing like being away from home to learn life’s lessons. Very interesting, Shweta.
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Oh yes, she has changed a lot! Thank you so much for reading 😃
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PB is def givin g the queen a run for her money💖
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Oh yes. It most certainly looks like that! 😃 Thanks for reading, Cindy ❤️
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we shall see…. of course always a pleasure💖❣️
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❤️🤗😊
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This looks promising 😊👍
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Thank you so much. I hope you’ll keep reading till the last part 😃
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Yes! I knew this turn by the earlier chapter. But there seems to be a twist.
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Haha. You’ll know soon 😉
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Yes! completed. It was an awesome fairy tale. Hoping you would write another.
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I saw all of your comments. Thanks for the encouragement, dear Kritika. I hope I will be able to come up with another twisted fairy tale soon! 🤗😊
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That would be great.
Thank you Shweta for the wonderful fairy tale.
Have an amazing night.
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It was such a pleasure. I’m so happy that you enjoyed it. Thanks a lot for the appreciation. Good night. I hope you have a great week ahead of you, Kritika ❤️🤗
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