If I am ever stuck
Without even the slightest bit of luck
In the middle of nowhere
With no way to get out of there,
I hope it will be with you
To keep me company all the way through
Come sunshine or rain
I know you will always remain
By my side through it all
When I am with you,
My troubles seem small
My smiles last a while longer
My heart beats just a little faster
It swells with happiness and love
And my soul feels free like a dove
With you by my side
My life turns so much brighter
I feel a whole lot lighter
Nothing can weigh down my heart
I wish we will never have to be apart
Oh, darling, you make me whole
You are the other half of my soul
My past, present, and future
Are much better with you in them
I am glad that we found each other
And as we brave life together
Our love only grows stronger
And it will last forever
If I am ever stuck
Without even the slightest bit of luck
I hope it's with you, by my side
This poem was written in response to Sadje’s What Do You See prompt #89 and Di’s Three Things Challenge #650. Thank you, Sadje and Di for hosting these challenges. The What Do You See challenge is to use the picture prompt as inspiration to compose an original story, poem, or a caption. The Three Things Challenge is to use one, two or all three of the given words in your post. The words for today’s challenge were fast, past and last.
For the visually challenged reader, this image shows an old car parked in snow. The luggage rack on the top of the car has a rubber raft on it.
This would probably be the first time I attempted to write a love poem. It feels a bit weird given the picture prompt. But this is what came to my mind when I saw the picture!
Image courtesy: Oziel Goméz
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Excellent! Well Written Shweta
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Thank you so much, Vansh 😃
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A wonderful tribute to true love, Shweta!
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Thanks a lot, Chris. I’m happy to hear that 😃🤗
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Wow! So love this post, Dear! You should think about adding this love poem to your “Best Of List”!! Bellissimo!
😊💕🌹🌹
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Oh, that’s so kind of you. Thank you so much. I’m overjoyed to hear that 😃
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Praise where praise is due! Always a joy and pleasure to read and share your posts with followers, My Dear! Hope you have a great day!! xoxox 😘💕🎁🌹
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I hope you have a great day
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Don’t Miss This Great Love poem!!!
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A beautiful love poem! With good rhyming and flow. Good one ☝️
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Thank you so much. I’m so happy to hear that 😃
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Wow my sweetie..! I loved this poem very much.! I can’t pick my favourite stanza because the whole poem became my favourite..! Ahh..! I’m speechless..! Very Amazingly written my friend..!
I love the stanza:
“With you by my side
My life turns so much brighter
I feel a whole lot lighter
Nothing can weigh down my heart
I wish we will never have to be apart
Oh, darling, you make me whole
You are the other half of my soul
My past, present, and future
Are much better with you in them”
This poem touched me deeply..!🤗🤗💕
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Oh Filarance! I am overjoyed to hear that. That’s so sweet of you. Thank you so much! ❤ Your words have made my day 😀
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Woww..! It’s so awesome to hear from you my dear friend..!😊 It’s my pleasure..!🤗
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❤️🤗
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Such sweet, idyllic lines! Loved every single line. Pure and full of emotions. 🤍🤍
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I am so happy to hear that. Thanks a lot, Sahana! 🙂
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Love your loved up rhyme! The car looks so forlorn, I am sure your lovely words will pep it up! 😍
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Thanks a lot! I’m glad that you loved this. The scenery does need some cheering up. Thank you so much 😊
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It sure did need cheering up! My pleasure, Shweta. 😊❤️
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I hope you have a great day ❤️🤗
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You too, my dear. 🤗
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Marvelous poem and so nice to be on a road trip with the person you love. Superb words so well penned. Romantic and full of lovely emotions, Shweta.
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Oh yes, it’s a great feeling indeed. Thank you so much, Kamalji 😊🤩
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Yes so true. Always welcome dear Shweta. 💝💝💝🙏🏻🙏🏻🙏🏻
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❤️🤗
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reading your poems, i’m reminded of what emily dickinson said about poetry:
“If I read a book and it makes my whole body so cold no fire can warm me I know that is poetry. If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry. These are the only way I know it.”
keep up the good work and publish them in a book someday.
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Oh wow. That’s so kind of you, Plaridel. I’m so happy to hear that! Your words have made my day indeed! Thank you so much. I do plan on compiling them into an e-book one day. Thanks a lot for you encouraging words. ❤️🤗
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I am not usually a fan of poems. But I loved this 🙂
This almost felt like a beautiful song. I would definitely hear it 😀
Thank you for writing this and sharing it.
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Oh, I’m so happy to hear that. Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words 😃
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Aww… this is too beautiful. And the rhyming is spot on!!! Great work dear. I absolutely loved this. 👏👏👏
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Yes. I wrote and rewrote until I got the rhyming sorted out. Thanks a lot, Preeths. I’m so happy to hear that 😍
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What a lovely poem. I am blessed by a wonderful wife and I am going to share it with her. ♥
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Thank you so much, David. I’m so happy to hear that. I hope that she’ll like this poem too 😃
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When one gets stuck, it’s always better to have a company. Heartwarming poem, Shweta!
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Absolutely. It’s always better to have good company. Thanks a lot, Anisha 😍
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You’re most welcome, Shweta! ❤
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This was a very beautiful love poem, it’s hard to believe that it’s only a first attempt at one. The rhyme and rhythym maintained throughout added a nice homely feel to it – and the words were clearly ones of true devotion. I write a lot of poetry, but I also haven’t written that many love poems. When I have – they’ve been ones that examine deep parts of human nature while simultaneously showing love to another person. Basically, they sort of analyse the concept of love while also showing it.
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That’s so sweet of you, Simone. Thanks a lot for your kind and encouraging words. Love poems are tricky, I feel. Yes, love poems do tend to analyse love and show it at the same time. I have got to drop by and read more of your poetry 😃
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This one is lovely Shweta. I liked the part, my past, present and future is better with you in them.
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Thanks a lot, Jeni. I am so happy to hear that. ❤🤗😊
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Ahhhh!!! This is so sweet!
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Thank you so much 😊
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Beautiful first love poem. I guess love is a language that speaks beyond words even on paper. No right or wrong way to write about love.
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Yes, love is something that transcends all barriers and boundaries. I am so happy to hear that. It means a lot coming from you, Jude. Thank you so much ❤🤗😊
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I quickly read t when you posted … read it again now .. Such a cute poem Shweta 🙂
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Aww, thanks a lot, HS ❤️🤗
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Thanks, dear ❤️
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Lovely! You gave life to a car 🙂 And the rhymes work well. Good one!
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Thank you so much, Vignesh. I’m so happy to hear that ,😊
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Welcome 🙂
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