She was quite eye-catching
Her portrait was captivating
Easily the prettiest graffiti on the wall
But as time passed, she'd her downfall
Scribbled over and torn
She looks rather forlorn
Her eyes no longer have that glint
The scribbles over her are a hint
That her best days are in the past
She was now an outcast
In the world of graffiti
Unwanted by the city
She bore the brunt of time
Covered in a thick layer of grime
A remnant from a glorious past
That surprisingly seemed to last
This poem was written in response to Sadje’s What Do You See prompt #90. Thank you, Sadje for hosting this challenge. The challenge is to use the picture prompt as inspiration to compose an original story, poem, or a caption.
For the visually challenged reader, the image shows a woman’s painting on a wall. There are words scribbled on the sides of the wall art and people have drawn on the face too.
Image courtesy: Sean Robertson @Unsplash
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I see what you did there!!
She was quite eye-catching
Her eyes no longer have that glint!
You have covered a complete journey and above lines are just an example of that. How a picture makes you think that way 😍 too good! I am going to try and attempt this one too 🙂
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Aww, Pooja. I’m glad that you noticed it. That’s so sweet of you. Thank you so much for your encouraging words. Yay! Do give it a try. The best part about this prompt is that you can write anything that comes to your mind 😃
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New trends pushing the old ones behind. This can be applied to many scenarios. A very honest and lovely write-up, Shweta.
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Thank you so much. I’m so glad you liked it 😊
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You captured the essence of this pic so well, impressive!
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Thank you so much, Kate 🤗
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most welcome, well done!
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I hope you have a great weekend ❤️🤗
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and you … here it’s sunny but very very cold!
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It’s drizzling and very cold over here. I hope that the sun manages to get a peek soon.
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I was fine so long as I stayed out of that icy wind, take care
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As heartbreaking as that was it was still a beautiful poem!
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Thank you so much, Pooja ❤🤗😀
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My pleasure!
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❤️🤗
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Ahh! This is so beautiful!!
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much ❤🤗😀
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Such an artsy take on the prompt!
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Thank you so much, SS 😊
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Anytime! 😁
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Beautiful poem! Flow is so smooth.
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Thank you so much, Aashi 😄
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Now, this is a brilliant response to Sadje’s prompt Shweta..😊
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Thank you so much, Mich. I’m so happy to hear that 😍
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Lovely flow to your verse, Shweta! And very deep thought behind it. Excellent. ❤️
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I’m so happy to hear that. Thank you so much, Punam ❤️🤗
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My pleasure, dear. Have a lovely Sunday. ❤️🤗
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You too, dear ❤️🤗
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what a wonderful poem to the prompt Dear Shweta. I loved your words and felt the sadness of being washed up under everyone else’s washing her away but she stood like the test of time in her core. nicely done. 💖
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Aww, thank you so much, Cindy. Somehow, melancholy was the only feeling I got from the picture. And still I felt she didn’t give up entirely. Thank you so much, dear Cindy. I hope you have a great weekend 😊
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You’re so welcome. And it precisely spoke to that and it was a fabulous interpretation. Bravo. I will and you have a great weekend as well💖❣️
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Take care ❤🤗😊
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Thanks 😊
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lovely poem!
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Thank you so much 😁
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So much interesting poem.
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Thank you 😊
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So beautifully written 😍
I loved it ! Keep going 🤗
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much 😊
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That was awesome!
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Thank you so much ❤🤗
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Loved it. Could visualise it as i read it. Great work!
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Thank you so much, Shreya ❤🤗
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Feelings expressed nicely
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Thank you so much 😊
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You are welcome dear👍🏻
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The poem was Beautifully conveyed.❤️ Shweta !
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Thank you so much ❤😊
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This is wonderfully written Shweta. I love it.❤️
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I’m so happy to hear that. Thank you so much, Janani 😃
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You’re welcome 💙
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❤️🤗
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😊
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Thanks, dear ❤️
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Thanks 😊
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You are almost telling her story as if it were true.
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I’m glad that my words had such a realistic effect. Thank you 😊
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It takes talent to write like you do. 🙂
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Aww, that’s so kind of you. Your words have made my day 😍😃
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🙂
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Nice
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