I know you are hurting Struggling to deal with the grief It hurts my soul to see you desolate You may think That you are all alone now Now that I am no more Nothing but a departed soul I may be gone But I am unforgotten I will always live in your heart And in your memories Cherish the times we had together But do not live in the past We were happy and content Until death stole me from you I know it's hard But you have to move on Life is for the living Don't spend it in despair I know you are grief-stricken A loss like this is hard to overcome Please, don't give up Don't let the grief consume you I wish I could touch you Console you and hold you close I wish I could chase away your grief When you break down in tears I am helpless, invisible A poor excuse for a shadow For you see, I can't leave you I can't cross over to the afterlife Until you let me go
Losing a loved one is not easy. Life doesn’t get more unfair than that. I cannot even imagine the grief and the pain. It must seem like an endless void. The very thought of it twists my heart and breaks it apart. My heart goes to anyone who had to suffer such a loss. With time, the grief might stop clouding the memories and you will able to let happiness in. But it’s a huge struggle
This verse was written in response to the Photo Challenge #374 hosted at Mindlovemisery’s Menagerie and Eugi’s Weekly prompt for this week – Unforgotten. The Photo Challenge is to use the photo prompt as an inspiration for a poem or short story. Eugi’s Weekly prompt challenge is to go where the prompt leads you and publish a post on your own blog. Click on the link to know more about these challenges and to read the entries by my fellow bloggers. Thank you, Nekneeraj and Eugenia for hosting these challenges. 🙂
For the visually challenged reader, the image shows a woman who’s holding a hand covered in white powder against a glass surface. Chalk marks can be seen on the glass, covering almost half of her face.
Image courtesy: Marta Bevacqua
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A poor excuse for a shadow! Wow. This is so deep and lovely. I almost cried by the end of it 😦
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Thank for so much, Pooja. ❤️🤗
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Mea culpa! But this is my point – I write different types posts if you like to read them, thank you, but I will leave anything sad/tragic/unread.
Joanna
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Your comment was so far off from my post so it caught me by surprise.
But yes, I get that. I used to prefer happy endings too. But of late, I’ve realised that tragedies aren’t that bad either. Life is a mixed bag after all. To each, their own.
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Beautiful, Shweta! I’d never thought of it like that.
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This was where the image lead me 😅
Thanks, dear ❤️
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You’re welcome, Shweta! ❤
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I hope you have a great day 😃❤️🤗
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Thank you, you too!! ❤
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❤️🤗
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Wow, this is stunning. Such a powerful poem, and an unusual angle from which to explore the pain of loss.
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Thank you so much 😊
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Such a deep heartbreaking poem Shweta! 💖💖 loved it.
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Thanks a lot, dear Cindy ❤️🤗
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Beautifully written, definitely personal for me
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Thank you so much. Grief can be so debilitating.
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Oh this is heartbreaking 🥺❤️
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Death always is. 😢
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This is sad but so beautiful
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Thank you so much, Swati ❤️
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Wonderful writing, Shweta. As time passes, the grief, esp. the ones that come with death, becomes relatively less burdening but still it always remains as a part of us.
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Yes, you’re right. As time passes, the burden becomes lighter but it will always be a part of us. Thank you, dear Anisha ❤️
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Really loved these lines:
“For you see, I can’t leave you
I can’t cross over to the afterlife
Until you let me go”
Losing two of my really close ones very recently, I can feel this.
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Oh, Aashi. I’m so sorry to hear that. May their souls rest in peace.
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This one made it’s way straight to my heart. I was almost on the verge of tears. Thank you so much for this poem💕💕
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Sorry that this was a sad one. Thanks for reading, dear ❤️
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Absolutely my pleasure❣
And don’t say sorry, this poem was something I needed
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I’m glad to hear that. Thanks, dear ❤️
Take care. I hope that you got closure
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❣🤗
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I really felt the pain of separation while reading this beautiful beautiful writing!!! Your words are soo apt and perfectly placed!!
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Thank you so much, Koushik 😀
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Thanks, Eugi 😃
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Heartbreaking poem.
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Loved a loved one is never easy. The void can never truly be filled.
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Loved it. And I also liked that you described the image.
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Thank you so much. I’m so happy to hear that. I always describe images for visually challenged readers.
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Reblogged this on NELSAPY.
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Thank you 😊
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Very well said.
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Beautiful
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Thanks 😊
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😎
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Nice…,
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Thank you!
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Was reading ur all articles …u write So fabulous…….cheers
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I’m so happy to hear that. Thank you so much 😃
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Welcome👍👍
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That ending. Wow. 💔 And so true.
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Thanks a lot, Moksha! ❤🤗😊
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Thanks a lot, Moksha! ❤🤗😊
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Thanks!
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Beautiful. So beautiful 🙏🏼🙏🏼
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Thanks a lot, Deeksha 😃
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Time is the best healer especially when one is suffering from loss of kith and kin.
Loved the shadow and afterlife connect in your poem Shweta.
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Indeed. Time is the best healer indeed. I am glad you liked it. Thanks a lot, dear
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Beautifully written ❣️
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much ❤🤗😊
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