the green monster rears its hideous head
fed by insecurity
and destroys happiness
Jealousy can ruin so many bonds. The green-eyed monster mostly arises from lack of self-doubt and self-confidence and it can led to disastrous effects if left unchecked. What are your thoughts about jealousy?
This Kimo on jealousy was written in response to the August Scavenger Hunt challenge hosted by Val at A Different Perspective. Val has given us 13 prompts lots of short forms of poetry to complete by August 31st.
Kimo poems are an Israeli version of haiku. Apparently, there was a need for more syllables in Hebrew. That said, most of the rules are still familiar:
- 3 lines.
- No rhymes.
- 10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third.
Also, the kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it’s uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems. To know more about this challenge, click here.
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Lovely kimo. I never heard of kimo’s before
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I came to know about Kimo through this challenge too. Thank you 😃
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Oh wow. You did a lovely job of the Kimo
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Thank you so much 😀
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Three lines and such deep meanings! ❤️
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Thank you so much, Anjali. I’m so happy to hear that 😍
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❤️
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Never heard of a Kimo before. This sounds wonderful! Green monster is an impeccable way to personify jealousy. Successfully shows how dangerous and ghastly it can be!
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I came to know about this form of poetry through this challenge. I’m glad you liked my take. Thanks a lot, Sam 😃
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So true! Well done, Shweta. 😊❤️
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Thanks a lot, Punam. That means a lot ☺️
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You are welcome. 🥰
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❤️🤗😃
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You’re absolutely right! Jealousy eats up the relationship like acid.
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Oh yes. It definitely does. Glad you’re with me, dear
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😍❤️
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Quite aptly put Shweta! Jealousy is quite dangerous, and can change the dynamics of relationships in a snap.
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Oh yes. It can ruin so much! Thanks, Ishita ❤️🤗
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Most welcome❤
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❤️🤗
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Good to learn a new format.
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Oh yes.. It’s great indeed. This poetry challenge has encouraged me to experiment with so many different forms of poetry 😃
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Writing prompts give a whole new direction to the creative process.
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Absolutely. That’s the best part about writing prompts!
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I haven’t heard of this type of poem before, but will definitely give it a try. Jealousy is a horrible emotion. We should be glad of what we have.
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I came to know about it through this poetry challenge that I’m participating in. Oh yes, we should be content with all that we have. Thanks a lot. Do give it a try 😀
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Very wonderfully done dear..!🤗
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Thanks a lot, my dear. I’m so happy to hear that 😍❤️
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You’re very welcome dear Shweta..!💖🤗
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❤️🤗😊
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🤗🤗❣️
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This is new to me and I liked it. ❤️❤️ Wisely said dear Shweta.👍 Indeed jealousy will ruin relationships!
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This was new to me too.. This challenge has introduced me to so many new forms of poetry too. And yes, jealousy can cause so much damage. Thanks a lot, Preeths
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Ugh, this is so true!!
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Thanks, Nehal 😃
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Wonderful piece, Shweta. Jealousy is such a big destroyer and at times uses stagnancy as it’s main tool. Loved this piece!❤️
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Oh yes. That’s true. Well said, Grace. Thank you so much ❤️🤗
I’m so happy to hear that 😍
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Truly my pleasure, dear Shweta.💕
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❤️🤗😃
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This is just amazing. Jealously from a person for a particular thing doesn’t only destroy you but your way to the goal. Great 👍
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Yes, Raksha. Jealousy can cause so much destruction.. Thank you so much 😊
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Ah, a new poetry form to me, how awesome. Love the poem, Shweta. Jealousy causes nothing but harm, to oneself and to others. I completely agree. Have a lovely week! ❤️🤗
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It was a new form of poetry to me too. I came across it thanks to Val’s challenge. So true, jealousy causes nothing but harm. Thanks a lot, Jeff 😃
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You’re welcome, Shweta. Always. 🤗
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I hope you have a great day, my friend ❤️🤗
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That was such a great way to put it.like wow di
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Oh, that’s so sweet of you to say that. Thanks a lot, Aksh ❤️🤗
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this is a beautiful take on the prompt Shweta
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I’m so happy to hear that, Mich.. Thank you so much 😍❤️🤗
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You are right Shweta. Jealousy devastates relationships. ❤
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Indeed.. Thank you 😀
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wow. captured the evilness of this feeling so well.
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Thank you so much, Rosema ❤️🤗
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Wow !
It’s awesomasauses !!.😉
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Oh, that’s so sweet of you.. Thank you so much 😃
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Rightly penned. If we fall prey to jealousy, it will eventually lead us to depression and self-hatred. Great take and it was interesting to learn about a kimo. 😊💖
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Oh yes, that’s true. It causes more harm than good. Thanks a lot, Shruthi. I’m glad that you came to know about the Kimo form of poetry 😀
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You’re welcome! 💖😊
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❤️🤗😃
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Jealousy is a disease, represents inferiority. You have rightly said, green monster. A beautiful take👌👌
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So rightly said. Thank you for sharing your thoughts 😃
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You’re welcome 🙏
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yes it is
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That’s a great kimo!🙂♥️💫
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I’m glad to hear that. Thanks, Diana 😃❤️🤗
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Oh that’s well said. I had to google whats a green monster, have not heard of it before 🙂 And yes, it can ruin bonds. I think there are lots of other reasons to be jealous too, but you have mentioned two strong points. Good Kimo!
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Oh. Glad that my poem made you learn something new! Yes, jealousy has so many reasons. I just grazed the tip of the iceberg. Thanks a lot, Vignesh 😀
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Yes, true. You are welcome ☺️
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I hope you have a great day 😃
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You too 🙂
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Thanks 😊
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A great new form of poetry and so beautifully composed, Shweta. Jealousy destroys everyone like crazy.
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Oh yes, it destroys so much.. Thanks a lot, Kamalji 😊
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Welcome dear Shweta 👍🏼🤗🤗
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❤️🤗😊
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😊😊😊💖💖💖
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Great words as always 👌👍 Jealousy can ruin not only you but your entire relationship with friends, family or lover.
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So well said! Thank you so much for your encouraging words 😃
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Your most welcome ☺️❣️
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❤️🤗
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