I am drunk on life
everyday, a new challenge
I love to enjoy
At times, life can feel too much like a struggle. But the more you fight against something, the more of a chore it becomes. When we really look forward to something, it seems like less of a chore. The task was to write a poem of drunkenness. I am not a drinker and this was the first thing that came to my mind.
This Zappai on drunkenness was written in response to the August Scavenger Hunt challenge hosted by Val at A Different Perspective. Val has given us 13 prompts lots of short forms of poetry to complete by August 31st.
Zappai poems are like haiku, but not. Or maybe more appropriately, they’re like senryu, but not (or maybe they are). This poetic form definition may sound kind of wishy-washy, but zappai are poems that have a 5-7-5 syllable pattern that do not contain the seasonal reference expected of haiku.
In other words, zappai are all those haiku people write that haiku poets recognize as not being haiku. Again, senryu could fit this definition as well, but senryu also can have a looseness with the syllables, much like haiku, so that 17 syllables are not mandatory.
Zappai should still be poetic, but they’re 5-7-5 poems that don’t include the seasonal reference. To know more about this challenge, click here.
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Wow! These are amazing lines…… Less words with deeper meaning.
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Thanks a lot, Aanchal. I’m so happy to hear that 😍
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I absolutely love this piece, Shweta. Wonderful. This line in your summary, caught my eye and touched me “But the more you fight against something, the more of a chore it becomes.” I completely agree.❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks a lot, Grace. I am so happy that you loved it! I have always felt that way. I’m glad that you’re with me on this. ❤️🤗
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Absolutely. My pleasure.💕
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❤🤗😊
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Succinct!
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Thanks a lot, my dear friend ❤️🤗
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You’re welcome my dear
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❤🤗😊
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👍👍👍
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I love this message, Shweta. I was just reflecting upon this very things yesterday. Inside of the acceptance of what is, is freedom. A beautiful poem, my dear friend. Have a lovely day. 🤗❤️
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Oh. That’s such a lovely coincidence, Jeff! So true, my friend.. I’m glad you enjoyed this poem. Thank you so much. I hope you have a great day as well 😃😊
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Indeed! You’re most welcome, my friend. Always. Thank you, Shweta. 😊❤
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Take care, Jeff. ❤🤗😊
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Good use of prompt Shweta
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Thanks a lot, Zi ❤️😊🤗
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You have realised the essence of a happy life Shweta. Wonderful ❤️
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It certainly makes life easier.. Thanks a lot, dear ❤️🤗
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It is the challenges that keep us going. Great poem.
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So true. Thank you so much 😊
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It’s good to be drunk on life Shweta. Love your words here 😊
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It is good indeed. I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much, Miriam ❤🤗😊
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Very well written. It’s nice that you also experiment with different poetic forms.
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much. It feels great to play around with the different formats 😊
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You’re welcome 🙏
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Such a wonderful take!
Also, I was laughing halfway through your explanation as to what a Zappai is😂 But learnt something new today!
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Thanks a lot, Ishita. I am glad that this one was entertaining! Glad that I was able to introduce you to a new form of poetry 😀
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😁❤
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Well said, Shweta. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Aishwarya ❤🤗😊
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You are welcome, Shweta. 🙂
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❤🤗😊
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Getting drunk on life can be amazing!
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Absolutely. It’s something that not everyone experiences. But it’s life-changing indeed
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Ahhh drunk on life…..wonderful Shweta😊😊😊
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Thanks a lot, Mich. I’m so happy to hear that 😍
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Aahh that’s a confusing format 😂
Being drunk on life is sometimes better than being conscious all the time and ending up missing the joy, happiness.
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Oh yes. I had struggled with this a bit.
Yes. That’s true, dear. Being drunk on life does seem better in many ways indeed.
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I knew of “pyar ki zappi’ by Munna Bhai. And now this Zappai!
Drunk on life is an amazing thought, Shweta.
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Haha. I’m glad you enjoyed it.. Thanks a lot, dear ❤️🤗
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Yes it’s true everyday we have to take new challenge to lead our life and we just run after it like a drunk. Well written 👌🌹💐🍫❤️
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Thanks 😊
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You did a great job on this prompt!! ✨✨✨🌹♥️
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Thanks a lot, Diana 😃❤️🤗
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This is true. Wise words dear Shweta. 👏👏👏
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Perfection! You really managed to compact the topic into a powerful punch in each line! Thanks so much Shweta for joining in the fun of the scavenger hunt!!
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I am so happy to hear. Thanks a lot, Val. It is my absolute pleasure ❤🤗
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I really love this, well done! Realised you’ve done that artwork yourself, impressive 🙂
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Thanks a lot, Kate. If you are referring to the image, it is not mine! :D😅
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amazing it looks like you, well done!
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I love this Shweta! Being drunk on life is the best experience ever as was so delivered in your poem❣️👏
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much, Cindy. Being drunk on life is a great experience indeed ❤🤗😊
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Oh yes and cheers to that my friend💖
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❤️🤗😊
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🌷🤗
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Meaningful lines!! Very impressive.
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I am so happy to hear that. Thank you so much ❤🤗😊
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Nothing more wonderful than being drunk on life…
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Absolutely. I’m glad you’re with me on this 😊
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