Life might seem simple But it's anything but! Memories, people, experiences. emotions, successes, failures, and so much more.. woven into an intricate web Too complicated to escape from, Too messy to make sense of, Too deep to fully understand, Too sticky at times to navigate through. As we pick up new tricks, The web gets trickier. We struggle and keep fighting Unraveling one puzzle after another. We struggle to pave our way through the one-way ticket… the journey from birth to death.
This post was written in response to Reena’s Exploration Challenge #154. The challenge for this week was to “to see it as a background on which you have to write something.”
I interpreted that as a prompt leads you and publish a post on your own blog that responds to the prompt. Click on the link to know more about this challenge and to read the entries by my fellow bloggers. Thank you, Reena for hosting this challenge. 🙂
For the visually challenged readers, the image shows a close up view of what looks like very thick spirals of webs.
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Loved it Shweta🤗🤗⚘
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Thank you so much, dear. I’m so happy to hear that. It feels so great to hear from you.
Ippo comments off aakiyo. I’m not able to comment on your posts!
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Yeah for the time being off akiyekua Shweta.. Avide sukhalle ellarkum..post elam njan vaayikarunde Shewetede.. elam nalathatto🥰🥰 keep penning..stay happy..tc dear🤗🤗⚘
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Good one, Shweta👌👏
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Thank you so much, Ramya 😁
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“We struggle and keep fighting Unraveling one puzzle after another.” These lines are so true! Loved your take Shweta!❤
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That was the first thing that came to mind when I thought of how much life resembled a web!
Thank you so much, Nawazish. I’m so very happy to hear that.
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This is amazing
Absolutely loved it❤️
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Thank you so much, Anjali ❤️🤗
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You’re most welcome 😊
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❤️🤗
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Brilliant composition!
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Thank you so much. I hope I was able to do justice to your prompt.
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Much more than justice 🙂
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I’m so happy to hear that. Thanks a lot ☺️
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Unravelling one puzzle after another- very well penned Shweta
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Thank you so much, HS 😃
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena and commented:
The deep, dark web …….. by Shweta Suresh
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Thank you so much 😄
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Beautiful words, Shweta. 💕
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Thanks a lot, Louise ❤️
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Loved it 💙
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Thanks a lot, Era ♥️
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💙🤗
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wonderful articulation Shweta!!! ❤️ Cindy
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Thank you so much, Cindy 😃
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❤️❤️❤️
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Amazing poem Shweta!
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Thanks a lot, Pooja ♥️
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You’re welcome 😊
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♥️🤗
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You got it right. Life with all its complexities, remains an enigma till we are no longer alive
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Oh yes, it’ll remain an enigma. Thank you, Sadje ♥️
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You’re welcome 😉
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♥️🤗
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👍
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This is simply beautiful!!❤️
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Thank you so much, Hema ❤️🤗
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Perfect story of life. Well done Shweta ♥️
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Thank you so much, my dear ❤️
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So beautiful 🌻😇
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Thank you so much 😃
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Very well done.
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Thank you so much, Lauren ❤️
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Very well written Shweta!
I liked the uniqueness with which you framed this.
“As we pick up new tricks, The web gets trickier. We struggle and keep fighting”
I absolutely loved it!
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Thank you so much for appreciating, Rashmi. These lines just popped up in my head as I started writing. It came with the flow..
Some days are like that. Inspiration literally flows out. Other days, I feel as if I have to kick the words out of me. 😂
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Profound poem Shweta 🧡
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Thanks a lot Jude 🤗😃
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My pleasure 🌼😊
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Amazing one. You have beautifully described the journey and complexities of life till death.
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Thank you so much. I’m so happy to hear that 🥰
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Fantastic way of portraying the dark and deep web of life, Shweta and the picture is apt.
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Thank you so much, dear ❤️
The picture is what prompted this poem in the first place. So I’m happy to hear that 😍
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You are welcome Shweta. Stay safe and take care.
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I will. You too, dear.
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🌷🌷🌷🌷😊😊😊😊
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So true. Articulation is amazing.
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Thank you so much, Kritika
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My pleasure 🙂
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♥️🤗
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“We struggle to pave our way
through the one-way ticket…
the journey from birth to death”
these lines Shweta ! a bit troubling but one perfect truth !!
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I just let the words flow. It is a one-way ticket, alle? If we are born, we all live till we die. And maybe, we’ll be born again. The cycle continues…
That was the thought process behind these lines 😁
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Yes.. the mystery of life !! 🙂
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Oh yes 🙂
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🙂 🙂 🙂
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Lots of comments as I scroll down the page. I wanted to say thank you for a lovely poem. The one way ticket really got me. Thank you for your thoughts and insights! BRAVO!!!
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Thank you so much. Your comment has made my day! Thanks a lot 😊
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I’m glad that my poem had such a deep impact on you 🤠
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The journey of life 👏🏼💕
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Thanks a lot, Joana 😃
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“We struggle to pave our way through the one-way ticket… the journey from birth to death.”… I guess that’s the baseline when you really think of it.
I love you pin point metaphorical take on life’s resemblance to a web💚
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Oh yes, that’s how I feel about life. Thank you so much. I’m so glad you liked it ☺️
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