I have been here For a long while I'm nearly as old As these hills themselves I have seen these hills transform From young mountains To a lush green expanse Though I exist in plain sight I am virtually invisible People only notice me When I cross the invisible boundary That they have set for me They tread upon me, Over and over again Until their well-tread paths Carve out a clearing Amidst my surface Weary travellers rarely pause To admire me As I roll over the hills and valleys Stretching as far as their eyes can see They lavish their attention instead On the misty white clouds Floating over me Marveling at their beauty Oblivious to the smirks That the mighty clouds throw my way I bind the soil and save the hills Yet, here I am Downtrodden, unappreciated, and neglected, Seemingly invisible until it's time, To prune me off.
Dear readers, do you have any idea who the ‘I’ in this poem is? Do let me know. 😉
This poem was written in response to Sue Vincent’s Thursday photo prompt – the #writephoto prompt. The challenge is to use the given photo prompt as an inspiration to create a post on your own blog… poetry, prose, humour… light or dark, whatever you choose, as long as it is fairly family-friendly. Thank you, Sue for hosting this challenge. Click on the link to know more about this challenge and to read the entries by my fellow bloggers.
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We should never take the earth beneath our feet for granted…
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Indeed. We shouldn’t. Thanks a lot for the prompt,Sue ♥️
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Wow ! Loved this take Shweta.. very true that we miss sometimes to appreciate the little things … the root cause of the vista 😊
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Indeed. We tend to take it for granted. Thank you so much. I’m so happy to hear that ❤️
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You’ve done well to direct our attention towards the things we take for granted. Great job.
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I’m glad to hear that my attempt worked. Thanks a lot, Sadje ♥️
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You’re welcome!
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I hope you had a great day 🙂
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My day has started well. Thanks 😊
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And I hope it goes well too 😊
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It did! 🙏🙏🙏
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I’m so happy to hear that. What time is it over there, Sadje?
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Right now it’s 11:33 am. Around 12 and a half hour time difference.
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Oh. You’re at the other side of the world 😉
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Yup!
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I hope you have a great day. I’m off to sleep 😃
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Good night and sweet Dreams.
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Thank you, dear ♥️🤗
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👍
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Beautiful perspective. Well put! 🙂
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Thank you so much, Reshmi 😀
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it is beautiful 😍
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Thank you so much, Era ♥️
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💙🤗
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Beautiful poem dear..
the earth beneath our feet or the green grass expanse. Which one do you prefer?
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The grass was what I had in mind while composing this poem. Thank you so much for reading, dear ♥️
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Oh well !! 🙂 🙂
You are welcome 🙂 ❤
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Nice one, Shweta. Beautifully described. The greenery deserves our attention. 🙂
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It most certainly does. Thank you so much, Aishwarya ♥️
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You are welcome, Shweta. 🙂
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, Rishika ❤️
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It’s my pleasure🤗💖
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The I is the path below us, which we tread upon…
Beautiful! I totally loved this!
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I’m so happy to hear that. Thanks a lot, Kamya ❤️
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😊💜💜
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This is just so beautiful!! Loved this🤩
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Thanks a lot, Akshita. I’m so happy to hear that! ♥️
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My pleasure 💐
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Beautiful poem
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Thank you so much 🙂
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A beautiful poem I think the I is the lovely plain.
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Thank you so much, Lauren and yes, that’s exactly what I had in mind
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I love the point of view!! It’s magnificent
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Thank you so much, Kim. I am so happy to hear that 🙂
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Beautiful !
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Beautiful poem!!
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Thank you so much, Aashi 🙂
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Pleasure
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🙂
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Lovely Shweta. I loved the simple and beautiful descriptions of the grass/earth❤ This was simply wonderful😘😘💖
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Aww, your words have made my day! Thank you so much 🥰
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I loved your take. Hopefully no more taking for granted.
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Here’s to no more taking for granted. Thank you so much, Moushmi ♥️
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My thought was grass. Perhaps because of the intruding on boundaries. You did this very well.
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You’re very right, Oneta. The grass was exactly what I had in mind. Thank you so much and sorry for my delayed response 💗
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Beautiful!! You are talking about the land below, right?
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Yes, Harsh, I was talking about the grass beneath their feet. Thank you for reading 😃
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Beautiful poem! Is it the grass?
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Thank you, Pooja. Yes, grass is exactly what I had in mind 😃
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Woohoo I knew it!!
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Yay. I hope you had a great day ♥️
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Thanks and hope you did too!
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Beautifully penned. It’s the grass, isn’t it?
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Yes, it is. Thank you so much, dear. I am so happy to see you here after a long while 🙂
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Horizon?
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I meant the grass 🙂
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Yeah i read in comments. 😊
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Lovely, Shweta!
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Thank you so much, Susi ❤️
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You’re welcome!
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Thank you, Sue 🙂
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