The golden rays recede
Forced to retreat, to withdraw,
As twilight chases the day away
Drawing the curtains temporarily
On the daily war waged in the skies
Turning the tables in the battle
between the Sun and the Moon,
As the balance shifts
From the light to the dark
The Sun makes his way to the Horizon
And the Moon rises up to claim his spot
Slowly making his descend,
The Sun slowly vanishes from view
Amidst an ever-changing spectrum
Of pinks, reds, purples and yellows.
Even from his hiding spot
Beneath the Horizon
His rays turn orange-red
And they paint a mesmerizing sight
Against an ever-changing canvas
Twilight takes over at last
Magnificent in her beauty
Belonging neither to the Sun
Nor the Moon
Neither to light nor dark
Her beauty a cause
For the eternal tug of war
Between the Sun and the Moon.
I love sunrises and sunsets, the break of dawn, twilight, and the fall of night. The sky looks so glorious and it always seems too beautiful for words. I have tried my best to capture the transition from day to twilight. I hope that you enjoyed this one. What’s your favorite time of the day?
This post was written in response to Eugi’s Weekly prompt for this week – Twilight. The challenge is to go where the prompt leads you and publish a post on your own blog that responds to the given word or image prompt. Click on the link to know more about this challenge and to read the entries by my fellow bloggers. Thank you, Eugenia for hosting this challenge. 🙂
For the visually challenged readers, the given image prompt shows a computerized image of sunset between two mountains at a distance amidst a forest of pine trees with a river flowing through it.
Image courtesy: ParallelVision from Pixabay
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Thanks! 😊
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Always a joy and pleasure to read and share your posts with followers, My Dear! Hope you have a great day!! xoxox 😘💕🎁🌹
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Twilight has its own charm indeed…and so does the starlit night. This one was very lovely.
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Oh yes. They are special and charming in their own way. Thank you so much for your kind words 🤗
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You expressed your thoughts on twilight/ nature beautifully Shweta.
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I’m so pleased to hear that! Thank you so much 😃
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I love how this charmed me🥰
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Thanks a lot, Mich. I’m so happy to hear that 😍❤️🤗
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Beautifully expressed!!! Indeed it’s lovely to see the colours of nature at twilight ..
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Yes! It’s lovely indeed. Thank you so much, HS ❤️🤗
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Beautifully penned 🌼
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Thank you so much 😊
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Lovely! The transition from day to night so beautiful. The last stanza is amazing? 😊❤️
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Thank you so very much.. I’m so pleased to hear that 😍❤️🤗😊
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My pleasure, dear. 🤗❤️
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❤️🤗
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Ah. the magical time when the day and night meet. I love the stories related to twilight when the magic happens.
Starry nights are always like something out of wallpaper. Loved it 🙂
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It’s a magical time indeed. I love starry nights too. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts 😃
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You ONE HUNDRED PERCENT have perfectly captured the transition from day to twilight. Your words here were beautiful, mesmerising. I love how you built up incredibly creative imagery by using anthropomorphism and giving the sun, moon, and twilight human qualities. Sometimes it helps us to be able to appreciate the true majesty of natural elements like this when they’re compared to things that we can easily understand.
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Aww, Simone. That’s a lovely analysis and interpretation of my poem. I was afraid if I had not done enough justice to the image I had in my mind while writing this. Thanks a lot for your encouraging words. It means the world to me. I’m glad that you loved my work. Thanks a lot for all the love you’ve been showering on my posts today ❤️🤗😊
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Wow… What a great way to present the beauty of sunrise and sunset… excellent writing… liked it a lot… 🙂
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I’m so pleased to hear that. Thank you so much for you encouraging words 😊
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Thanks 😃
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Thanks 😊
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Thanks, Eugenia 😃
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Beautiful ❤️
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Thank you 😊
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I have learnt new things from this post. Good work!
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I’m glad you had such fun. What have you learnt from this post? Thank you for reading 😊
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Thanks for the reblog 😊
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what a gorgeous poem! ❤
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